I went through and made a detailed outline, which was hilarious enough in itself, and then had to go through and correct it (I updated it to present time, because it was published in 1995 and airport security has changed A LOT since then), and... yeah. I think these plot holes were more egregious than most, although often it's "and why didn't they just contact the authorities instead of using amateur teen detectives?"
Anyway. I just finished up with Chapter 1, so I might try to do Chapter 2 before I post that. ;)
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Date: 2012-01-02 10:37 pm (UTC)Anyway. I just finished up with Chapter 1, so I might try to do Chapter 2 before I post that. ;)
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Date: 2012-01-02 11:35 pm (UTC)Yay!!!! so excited for the first chapter!!!!!